Tuesday, November 15, 2016

concept map for animation project


8 comments:

  1. Overall your video was really cute and enjoyable. The hair on the mermaid was perfect! I wish the transitions had been smoothed out a little bit more, with the music and the video. But I enjoyed the style of the animation and the topic of the animation. Nicely done!

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  2. I liked the different music that you guys used. The mermaid was really well animated and developed, especially her movements, they looked very realistic.

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  3. I really really liked the music. It helped portray the feeling of each scene. The animation was done well, and it flowed nicely from scene to scene. I can tell that you put a lot of time and effort into the drawing and animating

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  4. I really enjoyed both of your styles! Not only did the music help it feel very emotional but your execution of the angles, and different scenes was really cohesive and looked great! Also a cool concept; Your different ideas came together really nicely!

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  5. I really enjoyed the style of the animation, and I think it showed your comprehension of the program. The animation of each aspect as a symbol (the motion of the hair and the background and the body) is impressive. The idea of hope was successfully portrayed in the end with the expression and emotion. Aside from so technical aspects with the music, I think the music added to the emotion and the setting!

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  6. I enjoy the animation technique! The hair seemed to really flow with the current of the ocean. There are a few things that didn't read very well though, like the idea that her tears would be what made the flower bloom... under the sea? I think the pushing point could have been something non-environmental. I think it's a very visually stunning piece with the colors that you used, but the constant music change kept pulling me from the message and the content of the video. Overall, good job! 4 out of 5!

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  7. I liked the contrast between the beginning with the trash in the ocean was very sad and the rest which was very happy. The sound in the transitions could be made smoother.

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  8. I really liked how the story shows the issue of pollution in the beginning of your movie. I also enjoyed your animation style throughout the story, especially the scenes showing the facial expressions. I think the music did a good job of enhancing each scene, as each scene felt like it portrayed a different emotion.

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